Revenge of Reality (CBOD re-named?)

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Along with a redo of the entire plot and title page (that's an explanation of why I keep re-doing things; wondering if I can make them better) I've re-named the comic to be called 'Revenge of Reality'. I have a few character names as well as  a definite idea for the plot in my head.

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(before the comic started; prologue)

Anyway, so 'Revenge of Reality' is about a small, isolated forest's population of wolves and how they grew greedy and how they were tired of their everyday challenges. They hated reality and how it was so harsh and cruel; even though it did share its fruits of happiness and joy. They especially despised that their lives were not fair at all. Illness, famine, death..rewarded anyone; not just the ill-mannered or cold hearted.

The wolves heard about a fox who controlled reality, and, in disbelief, tracked the fox down and poisoned him with their madness and yells of pain and insanity in hopes of sealing away his power, which would utimately reward them with the life of their dreams.

(comic setting v)
The fox wakes up after those 100 years and then slowly tries to bring reality back into focus. (also known as 'the real world' type of view, because this little guy hates fantasy-like lives and 'happy endings')

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I really wanted to focus on a much different type of plot; something that keeps the story in a dream-like/surreal state and that builds up the characters personalities as the story progresses; whether changes or conflicts will hinder that, I'm not so sure.

This story will be very fictional, but it will not have 'sparkly wolves/animals' or anything of that matter. Yes, some pelts and actions will be slightly unrealistic/unrealistic in general, but trust me, I will not go overboard nor do I plan to. And the plot will have some turns that you wouldn't think of... (sorry if that plot sample sounded dull; it will be more exciting in the comic)

I also am not a fan of 'good versus evil' characters and plot layouts...its too
much of a cliché and it seems that almost ever comic on here has it. It's not a bad thing if you know how to make the plot complex and far from simple and predictable. On that note, I only have 'bad' (not evil!) and one particular 'insane' character, because both of those fit the plot anyway. There are no 'good' characters, or 'heroes', because both 'sides' have major flaws within themselves and both have good (right) and bad (wrong) intentions.
In my opinion, they're all insane. ^^

I've always wanted to have an insane character in my comic, but I didn't want them to be 'evil'...so the fox's power of reality came into my mind. The power to bring back reality is a plus, right? (:

Sorry if this entry offended anyone..just explaining why the plot seemed kind of odd...
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